All posts by Dana Huff

English Department Chair/English teacher, doctoral candidate at Northeastern University, reader, writer, bread baker, sometime soapmaker, amateur foodie. Wife and mom of three.

Piles of Papers

Papers, Papers, Papers: An English Teacher's Survival GuideThis is my ninth year teaching (tenth, if you count the year I taught pre-K, but for our purposes today, I won’t). I have been caught up on grading once this year. I have yet to figure out how to manage my piles of papers so that I do not constantly have a stack of some sort. Taking work home with me is merely an exercise in moving papers around, as I have three children running around, a cluttered house, and supper to cook. I try to tell myself this is OK, but it sincerely bothers me that it takes me so long to grade papers. I can remember being in the students’ shoes and wanting quick feedback, so I know how they feel when they have to wait a week or so for papers.

Carol Jago has a book called Papers, Papers, Papers: An English Teacher’s Survival Guide. Has anyone read it? Did it help?

My schedule is a modified block schedule. We do subbing in-house. Some days, my schedule is somewhat light, while on other days, I barely sit down even once. I teach fewer than 60 students, but I do a lot of writing. Students generally write an essay for me every three to four weeks. All of my students. I also do other types of writing assessments. Rubrics save my life — my grading goes much more quickly.

I can remember my students doing much less writing when I taught in public school and simply had too many students to make it effective. How much writing do your students do? How do you stay on top of grading compositions?

[tags]grading, assessment, composition, writing[/tags]

Thinking Blogger Award

Thinking Blogger Award

Thanks to Ms. George for nominating me for a Thinking Blogger Award. The rules say that “if, and only if” I am tagged, I must “write a post with links to five blogs that make [me] think.” It is an honor to be considered a “thinking blogger,” and I am honored to nominate the following blogs:

  1. Nighthawk, by Roger Darlington. Roger has been a ‘net friend of mine for a couple of years. He always has interesting insights, no matter what the field, and he loves to learn and share what he learns with others. Had he chosen a different path in life, he’d have made a wonderful teacher.
  2. Bud the Teacher might be one of the first English teachers I found in the blogosphere. His podcast was also the first podcast I ever listened to. He has a lot of interesting ideas about technology and education.
  3. Mike Hetherington uses blogs in his classroom in ways that get me excited and thinking about how I can adapt some of his ideas for my own classroom.
  4. Lorelle on WordPress is a great find for anyone who wants to get the most out of his/her WordPress blog, whether hosted on WordPress.com or on one’s own domain, like mine. I’ve learned a lot from her blog.
  5. The Super Adventures of Ben and Noah makes me think about the small joys in life, and reminds me to appreciate them more.

I need to mention that there were many other blogs on my own personal list of blogs that make me think, but I knew they had already been tagged, so I didn’t tag them twice. If I did tag anyone twice, I apologize — I checked each blog to see if a post about being nominated as a Thinking Blogger was present, and at the time I checked, none had such a post. Please check out my blogroll for more great education blogs.

Thanks again, Ms. George!

[tags]Thinking Blogger Award, meme, thinking[/tags]

6+1 Writing Traits®

A few years ago, I had never heard of the 6+1 Writing Traits® ¹ assessment, but now it seems to be all the rage. I think these sorts of rubrics are fairly intuitive; teachers have probably been assessing the same areas for years before this popular system was discovered/invented. The pervasiveness of 6+1 Writing Traits can be measured, I suppose, by the fact that textbook companies are now creating materials to help teachers use this rubric, and Rubistar has a template for rubrics based on the premise of 6+1.

I think at its core the idea behind 6+1 Writing Traits is sound. However, I have found rubrics that I find to be more exact. Jay McTighe shared these rubrics with us when he came to speak at our school last year. They were created by Greece Central School District in New York. The areas of achievement are broken down into six levels, as opposed to four or five. The rubrics measure Meaning, Development, Organization, Language, and Conventions. I really like the way these rubrics break down.

In comparing the 6+1 Writing Traits model with these rubrics, I found that the Greece rubrics combine 6+1’s “Voice,” “Sentence Fluency,” and “Word Choice” into “Language,” while “Ideas” is split up into “Meaning” and “Development.” That tells me that perhaps the 6+1 model focuses more on learning how to write for an audience, selecting appropriate words, and varying sentences, whereas Greece’s rubric focuses more on communication of ideas.

I love using the rubrics, as they keep me honest. There have been times I have wanted to grade a paper more harshly for problems with conventions, but in looking at the rest of the rubric, I realized they did a better job communicating and developing their ideas. I look at each area separately, and circle the level of achievement I see for that specific area. Usually, students cluster in one level across all areas of achievement, but every once in a while I run into a paper with no grammatical mistakes, but also no substance, development, or organization. I have developed a method for converting rubric scores into true writing scores, and I recommend that teachers use this method rather than simply muliplying the levels of achievement by the areas (in the case of Greece’s rubrics, that’s 6×5=30), then dividing the student’s raw rubric score by the product (for example, 25/30). In the case of a student who scored 5’s across the board — a high level of achievement — the grade would only be a 83. Using my method, the grade would be a 90. Before you exclaim that I’m “dumbing down” my rubrics, let me ask you — do you give 0’s on assignments when students really try to do the assignment? Or do you give F’s that lie somewhere between 50-59?

¹ 6+1 Writing Traits is a registered trademark of Northwest Educational Development Laboratory.

[tags]6+1 Trait Writing, writing instruction, rubrics[/tags]

Could This Be a Meme?

I participated in a Book Meme at my personal blog the other day. The list of books was eclectic and interesting. This morning I put my teacher nerd hat on and figured I’d adapt it for teacher books. This is how it works:

For books that you have read, put the title in bold. Books you want to read go in italics. Books you wouldn’t touch with a ten-foot pole are struck out. Books on your bookshelf are underlined. Books you have never heard of are preceded with a ? question mark. Books you’ve seen a movie or TV version of are preceded with # a pound mark. Books you have blogged about are preceded with an ! exclamation point. Books you’re indifferent to have no text decoration. Books you loved are starred *. To sum up:

  • Books I’ve read
  • Books I want to read
  • Books I wouldn’t touch with a 10-foot pole
  • Books on my bookshelves
  • ? Books I’ve never heard of
  • # Books I’ve seen in movie or TV form
  • ! Books I’ve blogged about
  • Books I’m indifferent to
  • * Books I loved

If you don’t know how the HTML code for the text decorations, and your blogging software doesn’t have buttons for them on your interface, at the end of this post, you’ll find a primer for how to decorate your text.

  1. The Essential 55 (Ron Clark)
  2. In the Middle (Nancie Atwell)
  3. Possible Lives (Mike Rose)
  4. With Rigor for All (Carol Jago)
  5. The English Teacher’s Companion (Jim Burke)
  6. # ! * The Freedom Writers Diary (Erin Gruwell and the Freedom Writers)
  7. Experience and Education (John Dewey)
  8. Elements of Style (Strunk and White)
  9. * The Writer’s Reference (Diana Hacker)
  10. * The First Days of School (Harry Wong)
  11. The Myth of Laziness (Mel Levine)
  12. Classroom Instruction that Works (Robert J. Marzano)
  13. ! Understanding By Design (Grant Wiggins and Jay McTighe)
  14. The Homework Myth (Alfie Kohn)
  15. Classroom Management that Works (Robert J. Marzano)
  16. Fires in the Bathroom (Kathleen Cushman)
  17. ! * The Teacher’s Daybook (Jim Burke)
  18. Lies My Teacher Told Me (James W. Loewen)
  19. The Unschooled Mind (Howard Gardner)
  20. A Place Called School (John Goodlad)
  21. Punished By Rewards (Alfie Kohn)
  22. * Inside Out (Tom Liner and Dan Kirby)
  23. * Teaching Poetry Writing to Adolescents (Joseph Tsujimoto)
  24. Bridging English (Joseph Milner and Lucy Milner)
  25. * Teaching Grammar in Context (Constance Weaver)
  26. ! * How to Read Literature Like a Professor (Thomas C. Foster)
  27. English Teacher’s Survival Guide (Mary Lou Brandvik)
  28. * Shakespeare Set Free: Teaching A Midsummer Night’s Dream, Romeo and Juliet, and Macbeth (Peggy O’Brien)
  29. * Making the Journey (Leila Christenbury)
  30. Teaching with Fire (Sam Intrator)
  31. Multiple Intelligences (Howard Gardner)
  32. A Mind at at Time (Mel Levine)
  33. * Teacher Man (Frank McCourt)
  34. # My Posse Don’t Do Homework [Dangerous Minds] (LouAnne Johnson)
  35. The Shame of the Nation (Jonathan Kozol)
  36. Educating Esmé (Esmé Raji Codell)
  37. Horace’s Compromise: The Dilemma of the American High School (Theodore Sizer)
  38. Savage Inequalities (Jonathan Kozol)
  39. Reviving Ophelia (Mary Pipher and Ruth Ross)
  40. Among Schoolchildren (Tracy Kidder)
  41. Cultural Literacy (E.D. Hirsch)
  42. * Getting the Knack: 20 Poetry Writing Exercises (Stephen Dunning and William Stafford)
  43. Teach Like Your Hair’s on Fire (Rafe Esquith)
  44. Blogs, Wikis, Podcasts and Other Powerful Web Tools for Classrooms (Will Richardson)
  45. Other People’s Children (Lisa Delpit and Herbert Kohl)
  46. Teach With Your Heart (Erin Gruwell)
  47. There Are No Shortcuts (Rafe Esquith)
  48. Small Victories (Samuel G. Freedman)
  49. Discipline with Dignity (Richard L. Curwin and Allen N. Mendler)
  50. Lives on the Boundary (Mike Rose)

I know I probably forgot your favorite education book. Please forgive me and feel free to add it if you decide to participate in the meme. I am also well aware this list is skewed toward English teachers, so feel free to delete those books in favor of books in your subject area.

Primer for Formatting Text

  1. To make something bold, wrap the text in the bold HTML tag: <b>bold text</b>.
  2. To italicize something, wrap the text in the italics HTML tag: <i>italicized text</i>
  3. To strike out something, wrap the text in the strikeout HTML tag: <s>strikeout</s>
  4. To underline something, wrap the text in the underline HTML tag: <u>underline</u>

[tags]meme, education[/tags]

Blogging Huckleberry Finn

Beginning on Tuesday, February 20, my 10th graders will be blogging about Huck Finn as part of their study of the novel. You can follow their blogging at my student blog. Watch for it!

Meanwhile, Anne sent me a link to Taylor Mali’s audio poem, “What Teachers Make.” Enjoy!

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[tags]Huckleberry Finn, blogging, Taylor Mali[/tags]

Teaching Huckleberry Finn: Part Two

I began reading Huck Finn with my 10th graders today.  I told them near the beginning of the period that I had been looking forward to their class all day so that we could read together.  I wonder if other teachers tell students little secrets like that.  If not, I think they should.  I think it’s great for students to see that we really enjoy the material we’re teaching.  I think that sort of affection and appreciation can be contagious.  We began with Twain’s NOTICE at the beginning of the book.  I asked the students why Twain would write such a thing.  Predictably, their first reaction was to take him at his word and assume he really didn’t want us to find a motive, moral, or plot in the novel.  I asked them, “What do you want to do the minute someone tells you not to do something?” and they immediately understood.  By asking the reader not to look for a motive, moral, and plot, Twain was making sure that the reader would do the opposite.  Clever guy.

I read aloud for the first two chapters.  One student who just finished the book mentioned that until he heard me read it, he couldn’t figure out what Jim’s word “gwyne” meant.  That comment is a perfect argument for starting the story by reading aloud in class.  We had to have a discussion about snuff, which is mentioned early in the story, because the students hadn’t heard of it and wanted to know all about it.  Of course, they immediately leaped to the conclusion that I knew too much about it not to have tried it; sometimes it doesn’t pay to be a know-it-all schoolteacher.  And for the record, no, I haven’t tried snuff.  We talked a bit about superstition and the meanness of Tom Sawyer.

As we read, I was pleased to hear the students laugh in the right places.  I do hope they enjoy the book.   I think some of them were intimidated by the book’s size.  We have the Norton Critical Edition, which has about as much text of literary criticism in the back as it does novel text.  Students at my school pay an activity fee that covers the cost of paperback novels, but the novelty never seems to wear off when they get new books.  Each time they ask if the books are theirs to keep.  It reminds me a bit of that scene in Freedom Writers when the students get new books, and murmur over them.  The only books our students can’t keep are the textbooks or expensive anthologies that we use.

On a personal note, I have taught this class of 10th graders for two years now.  I have them for two classes this year — American Literature and Composition and Writing Seminar.  I’m really proud of how far they have come and all they have learned.  We have accomplished a lot together over the last year and a half, especially this year, and I am excited to watch them grow and learn.  I don’t think I will be teaching them next year.  I think it is a good thing to have different teachers.  But I’m going to miss them next year.

[tags]education, Huckleberry Finn[/tags]

Teaching Huckleberry Finn: Part One

The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn by Mark Twain is, in my estimation, one of those books that everyone should be required to read. In the immortal words of no less a person than Ernest Hemingway, “All modern American literature comes from one book by Mark Twain called Huckleberry Finn… American writing comes from that. There was nothing before. There has been nothing as good since.” Rex Stout proclaimed in his 1969 Nero Wolfe novel Death of a Dude that the sentence Huck utters to himself after he decides to tear up the letter to Miss Watson is the “single greatest sentence in American literature”:

It was a close place. I took it up, and held it in my hand. I was a-trembling, because I’d got to decide, forever, betwixt two things, and I knowed it. I studied a minute, sort of holding my breath, and then says to myself:

“All right, then, I’ll go to hell” — and tore it up.

Think about how much Huck was conveying in that simple sentence. Every time I read that passage, I get chills.

When I teach this novel, I have found it important to provide students with a map of some sort that they keep in their notebook for reference. Students have difficulty with the concept of traveling south in order to get to the North — specifically, to Cairo, Illinois. The Center for Learning has a unit plan that has a great map in it.

I begin a study of this novel by focusing directly on the controversy surrounding it. In order to do this, I pass out a list of the ALA’s most frequently challenged books list. I found a good one in Teaching Tolerance magazine about two years ago. These lists are widely available, however. I photocopy the list for each student, pass it out, and ask students to cross out all the titles they’ve read. What they often find is that 1) they’ve read a lot of challenged books, 2) they don’t understand why the books were challenged. This realization opens the door for a good discussion about why someone might challenge Huck Finn.

The word “nigger” appears in the book 212 times. However, in the words of Russell Baker,

“The people whom Huck and Jim encounter on the Mississippi are drunkards, murderers, bullies, swindlers, lynches, thieves, liars, frauds, child abusers, numbskulls, hypocrites, windbags and traders in human flesh. All are white. The one man of honor in this phantasmagoria is ‘Nigger Jim,’ as Twain called him to emphasize the irony of a society in which the only true gentleman was held beneath contempt.”

Eventually, your students will come to this realization, but I have found tackling the issue head-on to be an excellent way to begin the novel.

After we have our discussion, I begin the novel by reading aloud. I have a bit of a Southern twang, and I can certainly amp it up when reading Southern literature. The dialect can be difficult for students, so I have found hearing it helps them to get a feel for it.

I have not discontinued my series of posts on teaching Romeo and Juliet. I will most likely post more ideas for R&J toward the end of this week or next week. In addition, I will post further tips and ideas for teaching Huck Finn.

[tags]education, Huckleberry Finn, challenged books[/tags]

Teacher Baiting?

The Los Angeles Times (via This Week in Education) reported a disturbing trend among our student today — “teacher baiting.” The object? To see if you can make a teacher mad enough to explode, secretly tape the teacher with a cell phone, then post the resulting clip to YouTube. If it is unclear that “teacher baiting” is the intention behind the filming, why not try checking out a few of these videos on YouTube and see what you think? It became clear to me after viewing just a couple that the students were manufacturing situations in order to purposely upset teachers, including everything from disrespect and refusal to comply with teacher requests all the way up to bothering other students and provoking fights.

YouTube has so much potential. We can use YouTube to communicate, to create content, to share. Sadly, it seems a large number of teens are using it mock, torment, and perhaps even invade the privacy of teachers and other students in their class. I think this behavior is reprehensible. Because we apparently cannot trust children to use the technology in an appropriate way, it will be necessary to remove access to the technology. I think that’s a shame — so much good can come of it when it is used appropriately. However, knowing schools like I do, I am fairly certain the majority of them will opt to take the easiest route and ban YouTube (which won’t prevent students from posting videos at home) and cell phones (which will be easy to get around).

Because of the close-knit community at my school (and, I think, genuine camaraderie and affection between faculty and students), I cannot see this becoming a big problem at my school. It never occurred to me that kids would do something like this. I have to admit, I’ll be watching out for it, and not because I plan to “blow up” or even because I become angry or frustrated with my students on a regular basis. The fact is that I don’t. I am a fairly patient person. I would see this as an invasion of privacy and intrusion upon my personal rights.

What would you do if you saw something like this happen? What do you think we should do to prevent it?

[tags]YouTube, teachers[/tags]

What is Web 2.0?

I must have missed this one when it made the rounds, for it surely must have. My friend Roger brought it to my attention. Better late than never! If you haven’t seen it, you need to:

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Think about the ways in which this technology has already changed and will continue to change education — if we let it, that is. I am often exasperated by how little teachers are actually doing with Web 2.0.

[tags]Web 2.0, blogging, wikis, YouTube, education[/tags]